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WRITE YOUR BODY LANGUAGE IN TO YOUR SCRIPT

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Here's a handy chart that employment agencies use when people are going for jobs. 

It is a chart of notable body language clues to emotions and it is the sort of stuff you can research to put into your books to denote TYPE or to BUILD characters.. Or people can use these in a studied way to project an image they prefer or need at the time.

Crossed arms: Anger, defensiveness

Moving away, tilting a chair back: You are too close, space is invaded

Fidgeting, tapping foot or fingers: Nervousness, boredom

Slow, deliberate walk: Confidence

Standing with hands on hips: Readiness, aggression

Sitting with legs crossed, foot kicking: slightly Boredom

Sitting, legs apart Open: relaxed

Touching, slightly rubbing nose: Rejection, doubt, lying

Rubbing the eye: Doubt, disbelief

Hands clasped behind back: Anger, frustration, apprehension

Locked ankles: Apprehension

Head resting in hand, eyes downcast: Boredom

Rubbing hands: Anticipation

Sitting with hands clasped behind head: Smugness, superiority

Open palm: Sincerity, openness, innocence

Tapping or drumming fingers: Impatience

Patting/fondling hair: Lack of self-confidence; insecurity

Stroking chin: Trying to make a decision

Looking down: face turned away Disbelief

Biting nails: Insecurity, nervousness

Pulling or tugging at ear: Indecision

Adjusting tie: Insecurity, nervousness

Putting tips of fingers of one hand against tips of the other hand: Confidence

Clearing throat: Nervousness

 

 

The curse of the Present Historic

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For years in America, and only recently here in Australia, the documentary and news community has been hit by a virus.  This causes turmoil in the minds of viewers and is an outbreak of 'The Present Historic'.  Recently, the doco series 'First Australians' suffered from this curse and frankly, that, and its poor grammar use overall and sweeping suppositions about what Trugannini 'does' and where she 'goes'.  An example of terrible writing.  Now I must say that this tense can kinda sorta work in the USA where all kinds of hicks grandstand and spout theory articulately and glibly.  But it just won't wash in Australia.  It just creates discomfort.

 

So imagine my angst when listening to Margaret Throsby's usually great interveiws on ABC Classic FM when Arts Academic and Historian, Anne Galbally started crapping on in the present tense - inconsistently - about Van Gogh - as though he is here slicing that ear as we watch.  

 

It was boring, annoying and inconsistent.  'He was' followed by 'he goes' and so on .   It is on the web for a while so take a listen.  Beieve me, it is very dangerous for writers and speakers to do this unless they can carry it off and Dr. Anne can't.  In fact, I don't think this style of speech suits the Aussie cadence anyway.

 

Pretentious and silly!

 

Listen to the podcast 

http://mpegmedia.abc.net.au/classic/podcast/current/audioonly/mti_20081023.mp3

 

What is Grammar For?

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Believe it or not, grammar has a use.  Just like our skeletal structure holds the human body erect, grammar is the structure of our language, creating 'rules' that standardise meaning.  If you mess with grammar (eg. how the words 'bad' and 'sick' have changed in meaning over the last generation) the language becomes more of a code than a device for communication.  Putting clauses in the wrong place, using verbs incorrectly, being sloppy about the spelling or pronunciation of people's names is not just annoying to an audience or reader, it is often warping the intended meaning.

 

Language misuse can also  ear-mark or exclude a group in society, robbing them of opportunities in life.

 And, contrary to what most people believe, it is not just French that has 'grammar'!

 

We will include some helpful 'cheats' to make your spoken word and written language more effective.

Last Updated ( Saturday, 01 November 2008 07:01 )